Finishing the Story

[Minichiken]

Hey guys ive been working on a fan fiction for eve and heres my first chapter. If you want to help me at all just email me at minichiken@hotmail.com and we can find a place for you on our team. Anyway heres the story, hope you like it.

[Minichiken]

Read @ Bottom

[Minichiken]

Read @ Bottom

[Minichiken]

Read @ Bottom

[Clepto Chiken]

Pretty good Mini, there is a bit of confusion in that second post is a bit confusing

Levi landed as the hawk exploded. Targeting the pod ejected from its smoldering wreck, his small guns ripped it open, exposing its pilots to the harsh ravages of space. Howling with delight, he went after the three other pods on the scene. He killed each one, regardless of the impact it would have on him in future relations with Concord. Finishing off the last, he turned on the retribution.

you don't mention him getting another ship. Probably a know given for the typical eve player reading this, but for the average person not so easy.

[SlackahChiken]

Oh, this is an Eve storyline? It could easily stand on it's own in one of the Sci Fi short fiction mags.

The only question is, just how many hallucinogens did Nemi do in his youth? I get a contact high just reading it. This is obviously what happens as a direct result of hereditary 'shroom use.

Or maybe I'm just having a flashback.


But seriously; Good Stuff Mini! Very imaginative!

[Minichiken]

lol i really need to update this, ive made it about twice as long but havent changed the part where levi goes back and gets his new ship... Didnt really think about that til i got on here to read the comments.

[Minichiken]

Using notpad 4tl... sorry about chapter 2 getting all messed up.

[Minichiken]

The only question is, just how many hallucinogens did Nemi do in his youth? I get a contact high just reading it. This is obviously what happens as a direct result of hereditary 'shroom use.

LoL apparently not enough, writers block 4tl